5 Points: Focused, clear, and specific (meets ALL 10 points)
My writing is full of the kinds of details that keep the reader's attention and show what is really important about my topic.

1. Your presentation made the audience want to go to your country or city.
2. The PowerPoint does not have all the details, presenter gives audience details.
3. You convince your audience instead of tell.
4. You give population information so that audience can tell if city is too crowded or if there are enough people.
5. You let audience know if the right resources are available.
6. You let audience know what the imports and exports are.
7. You give the audience tourist information.
8. You tell the audience moving costs, of materials and families.
9. You tell the audience what businesses are there, for ex. restaurants.
10. You give audience climate and weather information.

3 Points: Some really good parts, some not there yet (meets six of the 10 points)
The reader usually knows what I mean. Some parts will be better when I tell just a little more about what is important.

1. Your presentation made the audience want to go to your country or city.
2. The PowerPoint does not have all the details, presenter gives audience details.
3. You convince your audience instead of tell.
4. You give population information so that audience can tell if city is too crowded or if there are enough people.
5. You let audience know if the right resources are available.
6. You let audience know what the imports and exports are.
7. You give the audience tourist information.
8. You tell the audience moving costs, of materials and families.
9. You tell the audience what businesses are there, for ex. restaurants.
10. You give audience climate and weather information.

1 Points: Just beginning to figure out what I want to say (meets only two of the ten points)
When someone else reads my paper, it will be hard for them to understand what I mean or what it is all about.

1. Your presentation made the audience want to go to your country or city.
2. The PowerPoint does not have all the details, presenter gives audience details.
3. You convince your audience instead of tell.
4. You give population information so that audience can tell if city is too crowded or if there are enough people.
5. You let audience know if the right resources are available.
6. You let audience know what the imports and exports are.
7. You give the audience tourist information.
8. You tell the audience moving costs, of materials and families.
9. You tell the audience what businesses are there, for ex. restaurants.
10. You give audience climate and weather information.